Blog #4

http://elishaemerson.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/stakes-and-the-introductory-paragraph-2/

I believe that the process of critiquing and complimenting my peer’s work was very beneficial. It allowed me to read a variety of introductions and see all of the different ideas others had. I noticed some techniques that other students used within the introductions that I really liked, and that I would consider even using in my own essay. For example, some of my peers started their essays with a question. I really like this technique because it allows the reader to think about the topic and draws them in. I definitely might consider adding something like that in my introduction paragraph to grab the readers attention. From this experience, I am confident that my overall essay will come together much more nicely.